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girl are like apples on a tree

Posted September 13th, 2007 at 08:47pm


are like apples

on a tree the best ones

are at the top of the trees.

The boys don't want to reach

for the good ones because they

are afraid of falling and getting hurt.

Instead, they just get the rotten apples

From the ground that aren't as good,

But easy. So the apples at the top think

Something is wrong with them, when in

Reality, they're amazing. They just

Have to wait for the right boy to

Come along, the one who's

Brave enough to

Climb all

The way

To the top

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Female, 32, Junction City, KS


did you just call me a rotten apple, just to let you know I'm not rotten ,I just fell off while trying to bloom...


Female, 32, Covington, GA


Wow, this really made me feel better.


Male, 38, Milwaukee, WI


Girl are not like apple, even the big red juicy apple at the top of the tree will fall off and become rotten. I say, "Girl are like motorcycle, it just want to ride fast and hard and all you hear is the screen of the engine when you do 150 MPH like you are on"


Female, 36, Montesano, WA


How lovely! I guess this explains it all. :)


Female, 32, Los Angeles, CA


i guess my tree us super tall..haha..


Female, Age Private, Portland, OR


OMG. I can't say enough about how u just seem to know women so well. Ur profile writings is already impressive, now this? This really hits home with me. I've been having this issue for who knows how long now and it's been tearing me apart. Guy after guy- it ends up the same. Here I've been waiting for that one guy with enough courage to climb all the way to the top AND have enough guts to stay and overcome his fear of heights permanently. Someone who has the courage to actually look around and enjoy the view from above. Thank u from the bottom of my heart for ur insightful and meaningful writings. They bring comfort to those who need it.

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